Score: 3

"Pretty Run-of-the-mill"

submission: 3rd Grade Transformers

date: October 20, 2009

As I watched this, I honestly felt no compulsion to laugh at all. Now, I know that I can't really bag on you for that because everyone has different styles of humor and what I think is funny certainly isn't going to be the same as what you think is funny.

What I can talk about, though, is the way that this movie was presented. And what I mean by that is that this movie was presented in pretty much the same style as many other movies you have done. I heard a lot of yelling and inane chatter all throughout and I was surprised by the amount of swearing contained within this supposed "third grade play." Of course, you are free to take liberties, but I felt that it was odd for you to specify that it was 3rd grade and then make all of the kids either really shy or abusive pottymouths.

Score: 10

"Haha, satire is fun"

submission: Brawl Funnies [Dick 1]

date: May 11, 2009

So, not only did you make fun of a slowly stagnating brand of flash animation, you managed to piss off a bunch of stupid teenagers.

Kudos.

Score: 10

"It was nice to work with you guys"

submission: Sonic Shorts: Volume 4

date: August 6, 2008

Although I was only in like, 5 seconds of this flash, I really enjoyed the little bit of help I provided. All of the cartoons brought a unique style to the movie and I felt that the humor was on an upper level, to say the least.

It was a pleasure working with you guys, Khawner, especially.